digital music is totally not my thing
So i have no idea how much effort you have put into this, so without bias, heres my opinion and i really like it, that heavy base drum stuff combined with the string instruments was pretty evocative and dramatic. Exactly my kind of thing :)
As a whole the individual components of it were brilliant on their own but didnt seem to fit together in terms of mood imo. It felt like three or four different themes alternating. That bit of crazy at the end with the drums was obviously out of place, and it seems like you tried to squeeze all of your talents into one track. I think thats something you'll grow out of though.
All in all a pretty slick beast, i think you pwn at this genre.